Check it out, when you have a few minutes.
An excerpt from Bug:
I found a minute
insect in my sugar bowl today. It was brown and moving, so I
determined that it was not a grain of sugar, though it was that
small. I scooped it up and washed it down the drain. I wondered if
I should dump out the rest of the sugar, but I don't like to be
wasteful, besides how much harm could one little bug cause? I don't
see any others, though I really didn't check.
It has been about 13 hours since I published it. There have been six downloads and one review. Everything always seems better when you get a good review!
Review by: Gabion on Oct. 28, 2014 :
A nasty little tale which is very well written. I honestly think it should have been much longer so as to develop a greater sense of unease. Good grammar and well structured. Three stars is very good for me - especially for a flash fiction tale. I'll have to explore more of Murphy's work.
PS. I would like to say thank you to Gabion. I don't know who you are, but I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story, it makes it all worthwhile.
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